T. E. Lawrence to Edward Garnett
9.IV.25.
For days I have
meant to write: but something hindered.
The 7 Pillars goes
so slowly.
I like the
Verga book. It is defective in form (pointillé
almost, in analogy) but bright and very exciting. Dust-covers call
it a masterpiece... but if so whereabouts? Low in the range, I fancy.
Did you ever read
E.M. Forster's Longest Journey? I am struck all of a heap by
it: though it is as faulty as Verga.
Can't Cape get F.L.
Lucas' poems or prose in a collected volume? The review of
Flecker enclosed is by him, and that
accident has led me to write about him. He is a Cambridge Don: and
the Athenaeum first and New Statesman later
have been printing gems by him for eight
years. One poem among the poems is as near perfection as a poem can
be.
The cutting is
sent you for its other side: the remarks upon not writing books by
Affable Hawk. It expresses most excellently what I have always
suspected in myself.
There is a faint
chance, they say, of my return to the R.A.F. in May next. I've been
deceived too often to dare hope now till the
fulfilment - and then it will be too late to hope, probably:
sad, because the hope is usually the only happy part of an
achievement.
Cape has perhaps
told you that I flirt again with the idea of an abridgement, for
profit. Roughly it would be the abridgement which you made:
translated into the revised text.
T.E.S.
My abridgement
consists in cutting out every fifth word of the old text: when
possible. If the fifth won't go out, the sixth probably will.